This game is fun

Um, the artist writes explicitly on her website that this is not a game. So please don't expect it to be one.

That is a beatiful piece of art. Some of the poetry early on reaks of angst ridden live journal nonsense, but some of the later pieces are breathtaking. I especially liked the poems in the school

um, sorry jay but, i click on "paint a dream" in the opening sequence, get taken to a bunch of fireflies going in erratic patterns, and then im stuck. what do i do to move on? am i missing somethin?

This is absolutely amazing. Everyone with a taste for the more sophisticated will enjoy this.

This was thought provoking to say the least, it isn't a game but rather a point and click path through the creater's thoughts and mind. Some is disturbing some causes wonder...make sure you explore all you can for the full effect...

This animation is simply beautiful!
It seems to grasp the emotion quite well.
It makes me want to go read some Edgar Allen Poe.

I've been exploring jayisgames.com for half a year or so now, i camt remember, but this is one of the best pieces i've seen. i've many of similar art forms but this really takes a non-linear and subversive feel to it and creates a very beautiful experience. i loved the poetry and the art, altogether a very well done piece.

Beautiful... totally beautiful...

This was really cool and thought-provoking...I wish there had been a LITTLE more linearity to it so I knew when I had seen everything! (Like pieces to collect from each room that could be combined to visit a final room...so you had to watch everything before you could view the last scene.) I didn't want to miss anything but I'm afraid I might have!

beautiful game

~mayan

That was more like a disturbed poem than a game

Beautiful. Simply amazing. The artwork and poetry were breathtaking.

That was intense, but incredibly beautiful, not only in its visuals but in its wording as well; plus the music was nearly haunting, but added to the effect. Very well done.

Really nice! I haven't seen any interactive art websites this cool since Larry Carlson's Virtual Om. You folks should check him out by the way: www.larrycarlson.com

Hey, I remember Nathalie Lawhead! She was featured in a collection of digital flash artists some time ago. I lost the link some time ago, and I'm glad to see it's here. ^^

that was absolutely brilliant work. so deep and dark. i've not come across anything like this. makes u wonder on the creators' thoughts.

Visually it's very wonderful. Poetically, it shifts between being genius and being a tad cliche. But, in all seriousness, there's a lot locked in this, and I respect it.

My favorite bundle of lines is the one

I'm not sure if she's the original writer of the lines, but they are amazingly well done.

Hey I love this! It is absolutly beautifull. And I really want to get all the way through is to see everything. I have a problem though. I am stuck in the by the rose and I have a key that have a key that went up from the coprner now but I don´t know how to get on. the cross on the top tels me to stop like there is something I am missing, that i am supposed to do there and in another room with the chair I go up to the bookshelf andthere is a glass of wine and a book with a keyhole that is bleeding. I´m thinking maybe the key fits there but I can´t use it. And when I go to it an eye apeares and a voice is telling me to rest and the word soon, like there is something I am missing and I have to wait.The end of the hallway also tells me to wait. I think I have been everywhere, but I am oviously missing something. I´m a bit lost and I really would love to get some help. The game/ journey is beautifull and I really want to finish it! And thans again Jay. I love your gamesight!
Yvonniz;)

It seems that the author haven't finished the whole "place" yet, so you have to wait until she finishes it, thet's why it sais "soon"

This is beautiful.
I'm almost sure that in some parts the same music as in the movie Waking Life is being used. Anyone who can affirm this?

And great site Jay, I've been visiting here since 2004 and I still check every few days. I just can't seem to find stuff like this on my own. Thanks!

Why would someone with so much talent choose to create a work that is so morbid. Why must everything "beautiful" also be depressing. I would have preferred to see something lighthearted and fun, rather than gloomy and mournful, which are two adjectives I would use to describe this game.

Because underneath that brand-name, shrink-wrapped product that promises to improve your love life and bring happiness ever after, is the cold, dark reality that life is not perfect.

the music used in there is from Bethoven, do you identify Claire de Lune, Für Elise and the other one that I don't remember... it's great, it's great how she uses the music for the ambience.

I think I heard Moonlight Sonata in there as well. Really cool interactive mix of sound, gfx and poetry in this one!

I agree that the artwork and the poetry are beautiful, amazingly beautiful, but to be perfectly honest I found it pretty hard to follow and fully absorb it all. Just my opinion. Still beautiful nonetheless.

This was fantastic. Throwing poetry and opinions in a beautiful casing of artistic ability. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope the creator brings a lot more like it soon. Keep up the good work.

not scary, just... disturbing.
The poem "rosebushes" is really

Still, I suppose poems are anything you cant classify really...

My god... That was the single-most beautiful and engaging bit of webart that I've ever seen I hope Nathalie continues to add to it.

This is a beautiful piece of politically inspired art. The words used and the image conveyed by the poems and the art is so inspiring, yet depressing. I must say, if I had to choose one piece of art to be stuck for eternity with, I would choose this.

Absolutely beautiful. Very few pieces on the web really engage you and challenge you to think past the veil- and this does it. I'll admit, sometimes I had to really think to understand what she was commenting on, but that's what I loved about it.

The only thing is I wish parts of it were clearer...I understand it being fragmented is part of the whole experience and it is meant to make you uncomfortable and uncertain, but the parts that she had not finished...I wish she could have clearly marked what you can access at this point and what you can't.

it's almost driving me insane.. i cant sleep... i cried.. i thought id die!! for real.. My boyfriend told me about it..

Obviously a very talented artist who is better at painting than she is at writing poetry. The art is uniformly breathtaking and inspiring, every screen is like a whole different world, like exploring a museum. Art with a capital A. It's nice to see this game and Dungeonman 3 (and Gammabros) all the same website!

This is a wonderful piece of art. It has so many layers, you'll spend hours pouring through it. One thing I just found out, which is why I'm posting, is that the hallway looks different every time (note: I've only looked up this twice). It's worth it to take a peek, even if you aren't into the morbid details.

unbelivable artwork, and i dont just mean the drawings. the poems are breathtaking. i hope Nathalie decides to make another game, or rather work of art.

Did ayone else see the movie on the television screen. While disturbing, the sense of true irony makes it a beautiful peice of art.

hey click the word master when it is raining before you even play and you get someone to talk to called minibyte

I agree with Jimmy Who

This is an amazing piece of art, and the message is strong. I understand that the creator is making a statement, a powerful one at that, and the medium of interactive poetry works well.
I would still be curious to see if the creator could do something just as powerful without being so depressing and horrific. This scares me more than it inspires me.
As interactive emotion, this is genius. I can feel anger, terror, sadness...
The poetry is brilliant.

I wonder why these issues affect the creator so strongly. Some of these issues seem almost melodrama-ized to the point where it is hard to sympathize. If there was a bit more storyline in certain parts, or the creator could explain a bit more,

Then it might be more subtle, drawing the viewer in, as opposed to the hit-with-a-train feeling I experienced after watching some parts. It all depends on what the creator wanted to do, and maybe overwhelming the viewer was the intention (to prove a point); if so, the creator suceeded.
The

part was spectacular, and my favorite part of the piece. GREAT WORK!!

Overall, I love it as a work of art and a well-crafted means of expression. The creator is a wonderful writer and the poetry haunting, mysterious, and thought-provoking.

I loved the reference to Billie Holiday's song Strange Fruit.
That song really captures the mood of a lot of Nathalie's art.

I had to...stop playing...

Absolutely beautiful. And it's not too difficult to find your way around, contrary to what some people thought.

I must say, with sadness, that i do not find this too good. If a cheery thing with such power was made, i would be absolutely impressed. But this, so horrific, depressing and morbid just makes me sad. I understand that other people would find this great, but i do not feel such power in this game. A 3/5 will suffice.

Update